Recap: Narrative is the
order of events e.g. different scenes.
Story line,
directing the audience, how the stories told,
structure. Can be used to
push things to the audience.
Throughout our film we are going to use
restricted narration. We are going to hide the identity of the rioters from the audience until the very end. This will keep the audience hooked and wanting more and will also create a comedy effect when the characters are revealed at the end of the film.
At first we decided on a chronological, linear structure to our film, however we used this narrative style for our Foundation Portfolio last year and we wanted to experiment with something more complex. After much deliberation we decided on a
circular narrative. This will allow us to show the end of the story at the beginning of the plot and in doing so, we hope this will create an enigmatic feel. The credits will show the destruction to the streets after the riots, although in the story this happens at the end.
Examples of Circular Narrative in popular films:
As the narrative is
non linear, we will be using cross cutting from the riots and from the old ladies' house. Although these events are not happening at the same time in the story, they will work well together in the plot to create a fast paced, disorientated feel.
David Bordwell and Kristen Thompson- The Difference Between Plot and Story
Their theories say that the
plot works around the story. The plot involves various
plot points throughout the film but can miss out information from the story to create different effects on the audience. for example, films of the Thriller genre often miss out parts of the story (restricted narration), to create enigma and suspense.
Our film will support this theory- certain events are hidden from the audience to hook them and leave them wanting more.
Roland Barthes- Action and Enigma Codes
Roland Barthes theory states that film makers use 5 Narrative Codes. Two of the most useful were '
Action Codes' and '
Enigma Codes.' These are used mostly in restricted narration. Action Codes are codes used to tell the audience that action is about to take place. They enable us to "
engage actively by predicting the plot." Enigma Codes are a mystery in the text,"
a question raised by the text that the spectator is motivated to answer by close and active engagement with the narrative."
We are using a lot of enigma codes in our short film. They will mostly take place in the cross cutting scenes where we see extreme close ups of objects inside the old ladies' house (knife, walking stick, match.) As we are unable to see what they are (extreme close ups) they look threatening and cause enigma.
The plot of our story is set up to create enigma and suspense through a non linear narrative. This will build the audience up to expect a terrifying end to the story which will contrast with the shock comedy ending.
Brief Overview of the Plot:
Scene 1:Inside of grannies' living room.
Scene 2 :News Report
Scene 3:Close ups in grannies' house (hob, match,pan.)
Scene 4:News Correspondent and Riot Footage (and stock footage)
Scene 5:Close ups of Knife etc
Scene 6:News Correspondent and shop looting
Scene 7:Close ups (walking stick, shoes)
Scene 8:Wrap up of news report
Scene 9:Track out of TV and into grannies' house
Scene 10:Revealing the grannies!
By Colette